Not bad at all

Wow, a flash with a meaning behind it! That was a long time since last time. I am impressed with the ending, and how you get to it. I am not very fond of the art itself though, but the animation is fluent and that's the most important part to me :) The music could have been tweaked a bit better, because the soundquality wasn't top-notch.

You got great potential, and I hope to see more from you in the future.
Keep up the good work, and keep hanging on to your dream (whatever it might be ^^)

Calm and soothing, at least until 01:45!

I really enjoyed this piece, it makes me feel very calm. The volumes seem to be a bit uneven at some places but it's barely noticeable.

Love 01:45-> as well.

Keep up the good work :)

EQ!

You really need to play around with the EQ more. As you can hear the melody fades a bit when the kick starts around 16, so either the melody is to low in freq, or the kick is to high. Sort that out :)

Sounds like a good demo otherwise, keep it up.

Quite nice!

I like the song, here's some small pointers though:

That highpitch noice at 00:15 killed my ears, you really need to add a filter to that one. The build-up is a bit weak, and I can't get into the mood because of it. The melody itself is fine, but the offbeat part is used way to early in the song.

I like the change it the melody at the end, keeps it fresh.

Play around with the EQ a bit more, I don't know what you use when you produce (monitors/headphones) but the leadsynth have way to high freq.

Keep up the good work :)